This one's not terribly long, less than 4k, but the ending needs more work, it's a bit abrupt. I have tightened up a few bits where the tenses were slightly off and some wording was misleading though.
I have several fics that went off in unexpected directions though, still figuring those out. In all I worked on 6 different fics in 2 fandoms today, all things I'm trying to get ready for posting but I still think could be better, and they're some of the ones that are closest to being ready. Others are still a long way from being done. I'll get there eventually.
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I have several fics that went off in unexpected directions though, still figuring those out. In all I worked on 6 different fics in 2 fandoms today, all things I'm trying to get ready for posting but I still think could be better, and they're some of the ones that are closest to being ready. Others are still a long way from being done. I'll get there eventually.